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heres binda coloured not too sure about the background though.. tried to blend it in with her clothes....



hows that? i changed the background colour and her position on the page...?

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:iconclemjutsu:
good shading mang, if you're worried about background try using composite colours

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Hey Dave this is seriously peachy bud!

I like the background but if you want to change it, maybe you can look at subtle 60's style texture to it...

I would make sure you have more 'air' at the bottom. At the moment, the composition is top-heavy. If you pull the background down (not the circle), making more space between the bottom of the circle and the bottom of the page, then the image will be better balanced.
Typically, when you are considering your composition the top and sides would have the same "air" space between the edge of the image and the edge of the frame. The bottom margin is always broader than the other three sides because optically it needs more support to stop the picture sliding out of the frame

VERY nice work!
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kk i shall do that!

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:iconsaagu:
thnx man well its more wat u guys think do u think it works or not??

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really nice, the hair got my attention the most.
i like the shading on the skirt, the top doesnt look finished.
awesome work =D

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i cant shade the top properly without it lookin fucked! im not sure how to do it.. my stills rnt good enough at the moment once iv had more experiance i will try

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:iconclemjutsu:
It doesn't matter what I or anyone else thinks but if you want my opinion then yes, it works well :D

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thnx man!!! took u a while to comment it though *shakes fist at clem* respond quicker!!! XD

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